The Invader Adventure
Thunk, swish, clank, clank. I was on Invader, a ride at Rainbows end, and was TOTALLY regretting it. My stomach was turning itself inside out. As we got faster, we went higher. my mouth opened and I … SCREAMED LOUDER THAN EVER IN THE PAST TWO YEARS! AAHHHHHH!! Wiremu and Jasmine screamed too, but not as loud as I did. At last, It slowed and shivered to a stop. Then, you would think I was gonna start crying, BUT yet, I screeched: I WANNA GO AGAIN! *Sigh.* good times, good times indeed.
The Fear Fall Fiasco
The Fear Fall on the other hand was a BIG FAT NO NO! I was babbling on about how I LOVED it last time, two years ago. I went on it TWICE. But this time, … Yeah … uhh NO WAY. So we waited in line for about 5 minutes. And I had HUGE butterflies inside my stomach, wait, no, make that GINORMOUS HORNETS! That was how NERVOUS I was. But it was too late to change my mind. Because I was already ON THE FEAR FALL!!! My heart was racing. I shut my eyes but the view was beautiful, I couldn’t resist. Oops. Big mistake. TOO HIGH, TOO HIGH! My breathing shortened and sped up. Click, click, clink. The seats clicked into place. OH GOD. AAHHHHHHHHH! I screeched and, as I got off … the tears came tumbling down my cheeks. *Sniff sniff.*
This is an excellent piece of writing Caylee. You have hooked me in from the beginning to the end and taken me right back to my own Rainbows End experience. I agree with your photo comment, "can we go back there?"
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing Caylee. You totally captured your feelings.
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